Too much emphasis on the tweets, I like when it picks up into the song. The chorus was loud in my opinion and took away from the bass, which I wanted to hear more of the crucnghy sound.
That song sent a fantasy tone through my head. I saw you went for a dubstep beat, I was anticipating some bass wobble or deep crunchyness.
Yeah, the dubstep is new to me...
The voice is definatley firm an distinct, the breathing sounds for some reason sounded a little off to me. If it could be more in sync with the breathing and the voice.
Hey thanks man I can try to fix that. The breathing is just an overlay. I'm sure I can edit the hell out of it. slash done
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